2011年2月17日 星期四

Informal Writing #3

     I believe many people in class has been Valley Fair Mall before. The reason is very simple and clear. Because Valley Fair Mall is one of bigger mall in San Jose. If you've been here before, you know that was hard to find parking space in here, especially in the holidays. There are many categories of products. Great products such as furniture and small accessories are also available in here. If you have a map, you find that the valley fair mall is located in the center of South Bay. Even though it is not holiday, there are still lively and crowded. For me, Vally Fair Mall is very big and I always get lost in here. 
     According to the statistics on the fast sheet, San Jose’s per capita income is $33,849 per year. For the professional/technical, their annual income is around $120,000 while there are 35% of residents are employed in this area (17% for industry of durable goods such as computers and 18% for professional and business service). These statistics indicated that in general people are high-income consumers. They occupy 35% of San Jose's residents. This explains their ability to spend huge money on luxury retailers like Louis Vuitton and Swarovski, etc. Apart from a luxury store, there are many shops are affordable like Levi's jeans and Vans store, etc. Overall Valley Fair suit from teens to adults. Suit from low-income consumers to high-income consumers.
     In my observation in Valley Fair Mall. People are very happy and enjoy to shopping in here. Their face have full of smiles. Valley fair's design is very good and at the end of the East and the South is the Macy's chain stores. Even if you're hungry, you can also go to the center of 2nd floor area to find food court. There have very clearly direction boards around the Mall. You can find your destination clearly. I do not have too much for the comments of mall. I am most concerned about the problem is a holiday parking space. I was trying to go shopping in thanksgiving. Unimaginable, I found a parking space close to a half-hour. Very few parking spaces in mobile. I saw a lot of people who can not find parking spaces chose to leave. My advice is part of parking spaces to be used to limit the flow of parking spaces. 
     I am enjoy going to have many kinds of product's shopping mall. I can buy whatever I want in here. So, that's the reason why I love to go to shopping in Valley Fair Mall. It is a good place for holiday and buy gifts in here.

1 則留言:

  1. This response is good, but it need to be a bit more critical in terms of its discussion of the mall and its use of statistics.
    7.5/9

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